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Really interesting concept, Distructive. 

 

Few things though. Although I can kinda tell what's going on there's WAY too much grey going on to support any depth. It really makes this image look extremely flat. I'd like to see this with color! Secondly, if you didn't tell me what the text said at the bottom, I would have a really hard time guessing what it was supposed to say. Especially in a piece that has so much going on, I believe you need work on making your text stand out. Definitely would like to see a second take at this applying what I've pointed out. Keep practicing!

 

Look at all this color you could utilize!

 

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59 minutes ago, Goats said:

Really interesting concept, Distructive. 

 

Few things though. Although I can kinda tell what's going on there's WAY too much grey going on to support any depth. It really makes this image look extremely flat. I'd like to see this with color! Secondly, if you didn't tell me what the text said at the bottom, I would have a really hard time guessing what it was supposed to say. Especially in a piece that has so much going on, I believe you need work on making your text stand out. Definitely would like to see a second take at this applying what I've pointed out. Keep practicing!

 

Look at all this color you could utilize!

 

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What color?




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How bou' dat ? @Goats




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On 11/16/2018 at 5:36 AM, Distructive said:

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How bou' dat ? @Goats

 

Exactly, my dude! It looks awesome.




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