nice but something seems strange about it. The light effect brushes on the text dont feel necessary to be that hard and that much.
Your text becomes barely visable as it is from an existing logo i wouldnt put on there it also feels like its less input from you to create your own blending with
something more original than just the existing logo
For the rest i personally like the composition, the color picks blend well. Keep it up and remember every sig your make ais a step towards progressing.
Theres alot that could be fixed on this sig.
Heres how i'd make it out of my point of v